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(Y)our relationship

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Haridasa Siva

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This is a poem I wrote some years back....


You’ve been talking to me
Like a news reader
I could hear you
Only when I made the news

You’ve been playing with me
Like a honeybee
I felt your sting
Only when my flower was totally dry

You’ve been dealing with me
Like a trader of goods
I came to know your business
Only when I became bankrupt

You’ve been preparing me
Like a dry wood
I didn’t quite realize it
Till you made me a coffin

You’ve been going away from me
Like a falling hair
I felt your separation
Only when I was completely bald



Loka samasta sukhino bavantu.
 

Visalakshi Ramani

Well-known member
What happens finally...Comedy or tragedy??:hug:

Since this was written a few years ago...

Try to improve the
rhyme and rhythm now. Home work for you!


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