Dear Siva,
There is a lot of disconnect in your kavithai. The first stanza above is an enigma. வாழ்வி லதிகம் விருப்பமில்லை -ok. But how come வஞ்சி யுன்னால் விடுதலை ? And what is this வளம் கொண்ட விரலிடை What exactly do you want to say. I have a capacity to imagine and visualise but here I completely miss the idea. Will you please explain.
உன்னுள் கனவி லிறங்கியவன்If this is true this requires a prelude. Otherwise it stands alone. உடையை வெறுத் தொதுக்கியவன்--what is this ???
மாலையே எவ்வேளையுமாய்க் கோருவதோ--What are you saying?
These are just friendly querries. Please do not misunderstand. If you do not want to reply it is perfectly ok with me. Thanks.
First of all, thank you for reading my work and also for sharing your views. I have attempted to respond to your queries below.
Dear Siva,
There is a lot of disconnect in your kavithai.
Not according to me. Let me explain.
The first stanza above is an enigma. வாழ்வி லதிகம் விருப்பமில்லை -ok. But how come வஞ்சி யுன்னால் விடுதலை ?
My spirits are low.
But you lift them up.
And what is this வளம் கொண்ட விரலிடை What exactly do you want to say. I have a capacity to imagine and visualise but here I completely miss the idea. Will you please explain.
வளம் கொண்ட விரலிடை - எனக்கு
வசந்தம் தரும் கோடை!
It is nice to be between your fingers (Your hug gives me warmth)
உன்னுள் கனவி லிறங்கியவன்If this is true this requires a prelude. Otherwise it stands alone.
I was deep down in you (I have been ‘intimate’ with you) in my dreams
உடையை வெறுத் தொதுக்கியவன்--what is this ???
And I (naturally) abandoned my clothes
மாலையே எவ்வேளையுமாய்க் கோருவதோ--What are you saying?
I ought to wish only evenings all the time (so that we can ‘unite’)?
These are just friendly querries. Please do not misunderstand. If you do not want to reply it is perfectly ok with me. Thanks.
It is actually heartening to see someone dissect my work of literature. I am only too happy to see that you took so much pain to interpret/analyse my work. Thank you for that. I look forward to more such posts. Thank you.
A loose translation:
Come, fall in love…… (I remember it as tag line of the popular Hindi movie DDLJ)
I am apathetic
But you lift my spirits up;
Your hug
Gives me warmth!
Your lips are sweet.
I have been longing for you all these days.
Please come to me
I can’t control myself anymore.
Your touch gave me kick
And I got intimate with you in my dreams.
I forsake my clothes
As I went to bed with your thoughts.
Wage a war of kisses
And let our (sweet) screams be the only sound.
Let’s follow the ‘natural course of action’
As I want to lose myself inside you!
Are we to unite in marriage?
Am I to be in a state of despair?
Ought I to seek only evenings?
When would I be normal?